Final draft

Using the several forms of feedback from my original video I changed several things and added new shots to create my final draft. Detail on my feedback will all be displayed and explained in my evaluation.

First Draft- Music video

Unfortunately when I was converting my movie to a video file some of my footage had been lost. For the shots that are misisng i put credits in place of it. These scenes will be refilmed next week.

This is due to me deleting some of the videoing of the memory card that I hadn't imported properly onto the mac.

Below is my first draft of the video:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=j4vdJTJm6KU